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BISI LAWRENCE is holidaying with her parents in the
city. Usually, a holiday is a moment for happiness, merriments and adventures.
But for Bisi, it's an
indoor world of loneliness and depression. Why is everyone so concerned about
her love-life? Why is she bent on resigning from the human race? What then
happens when she suddenly receives a buzz from MIKE, her
best friend's boyfriend? "HARD BREAK", this
story is based on the love-life experience of an adorable teenage girl. Curtsy of WARD9ICE, this screenplay format of the teenage love story “HARD BREAK” is an advance preamble of the FULL STORY which is set to publish soon on this platform.
HARD BREAK
BY: ward9ice
Genre: Teen
Drama / Romance Setting: A modest city apartment, present day
CHARACTERS
- BISI LAWRENCE – 17, introspective,
emotionally fragile but intelligent
- MRS. LAWRENCE – Bisi’s mother, Ada, warm
but intrusive
- MR. LAWRENCE – Bisi’s father, quiet and
observant
- TOLA – Bisi’s best friend,
bubbly and unaware
- MIKE – Tola’s boyfriend,
charming and complicated
SCENE 1 – INT. LAWRENCE APARTMENT –
LIVING ROOM – DAY
Sunlight
filters through the curtains. BISI sits curled up on the couch, scrolling
through her phone. Her parents chatter in the background, planning outings.
MRS. LAWRENCE Bisi, darling, we’re heading to the museum later. You should come. It’ll
lift your spirits.
BISI (without looking up) I’m fine here. Museums are just
buildings full of things that used to matter.
MR. LAWRENCE (softly) She needs space, Ada. Let her be.
MRS.
LAWRENCE sighs and exits. BISI stares blankly at her phone. A notification pops
up: “MIKE: Hey. Can we talk?”
SCENE 2 – INT. BISI’S BEDROOM – NIGHT
BISI lies
on her bed, headphones in. Her journal is open beside her. She hesitates, then
opens MIKE’s message.
MIKE (TEXT) I know this is weird. But I’ve been thinking about you. A lot.
BISI’s
heart races. She types, then deletes. She finally replies.
BISI (TEXT) You’re with Tola. Why are you texting me?
MIKE (TEXT) Because you see me. The real me. Tola doesn’t. You always did.
SCENE 3 – FLASHBACK – INT. SCHOOL
LIBRARY – DAY
BISI and
MIKE sit across from each other, laughing over a shared book. TOLA walks in,
waving.
TOLA There you two are! Mike, come on—we’re late for rehearsal.
MIKE
hesitates, glances at BISI, then leaves with TOLA. BISI watches, her smile
fading.
SCENE 4 – INT. BISI’S BEDROOM – NIGHT
Back in
the present. BISI stares at her reflection in the mirror.
BISI (V.O.) Why does everyone care so much about who I love? Why does it feel like
my heart is public property?
She picks
up her journal and begins to write.
BISI (V.O.) I’m not resigning from the human race. I’m just tired of pretending I’m
okay with being invisible.
SCENE 5 – INT. LAWRENCE APARTMENT –
LIVING ROOM – DAY
BISI
walks in, dressed and ready. Her parents look surprised.
MRS. LAWRENCE You’re coming?
BISI Yeah. Let’s go see those things
that used to matter.
SCENE 6 – INT. MUSEUM – LATER
BISI
stands before a painting of a girl staring into the distance. MIKE walks in,
unexpectedly.
MIKE I didn’t know you’d be here.
BISI (without turning) Neither
did I.
MIKE I meant what I said. I care
about you.
BISI Then care enough to let me heal.
Alone.
She walks
away, leaving MIKE stunned. Her parents watch from afar, proud.
FADE OUT
BISI (V.O.) Love isn’t always a story. Sometimes, it’s a lesson. And I’m finally
ready to learn mine.
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